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From: Carol
To: "Fi.Da.M. Investment Ltd" <fidam_bahamas@hotmail.com>
Subject: Re: Re: Spelling
Date: Sun, 25 Jun 2000 19:11:12 -0400
Hi Fidam -
I certainly sympathize with your predicament.
I actually work for a web site designer, proof reading his sites
for content, therefore it would be unethical of me to do the
same thing for you for free.
I hope you understand. I would highly recommend that you find
someone who is bilingual (your native tongue and English) and
pay them to assist you. Many businesses have failed, because
they neglect these small thing in the beginning. As they say,
you never get a second chance to make a first impression.
If you are having trouble finding anyone to hire, you can hire
me. But since I only speak English, I really think you would be
better off with someone who speaks your native language as well.
Take care and best wishes,
Carol
thank you carol,
but we already asked to some english friend to correct the errors.
what we would like to do with "houseofplayer.com", is
not the always seen casino online, but we wanted to give to all
gambler a free space on the web. and as it is free (i do the
search of the freeware during the saturday afternoon) we think
that the people will appreciate same way, also is coming soon a
newsletter to all the people who wants to register, and a free
newsgroup dedicated to our visitors.
also consider that our website is seen by many people of many
countries from south america, to australia and many of them know
english like me, as second language.
anyhow what i can tell You is that normally i have 261 visits per
week, with an average of 25 downloads of the free software.
I hope that our visitors will write us as You did to get their
impressions.
thanks again carol
----- Original Message -----
From: Bob
To: fidam_bahamas@hotmail.com
Sent: Thursday, June 22, 2000 9:55 AM
Subject: Re:
Fidam
The errors are very minor
You could ask Carol whether you should use a British spell check
or a USA spell check!
Although in this case it wouldn't have made any difference.
REPLY:
Thank You Bob, I was starting to think about
learning again English. Anyhow any help is welcome.
From: Carol
To: fidam_bahamas@hotmail.com
Subject: Spelling
Date: Sat, 17 Jun 2000 18:53:56 -0700
Hi -
Since you asked for suggestions, I don't mean to be impolite, but
I
highly recommend you run your home page through a spell checker.
I saw
two spelling error at a quick glance (the words were - spelled
correctly
here - immediately and developing). The grammar is a bit rough as
well.
People are going to be very concerned about trusting their money
to a
site that seems to lack attention to detail.
With several poker sites already out on the Internet, mistakes
like
these can be the type of lack of professionalism that can be the
difference between success and failure.
I saw a post for your site on rec.gambling.poker and decided to
come
over. I saw the spelling mistakes and decided to leave.
I hope you don't mind my candor.
Take Care,
Carol
REPLY:
Dear Carol,
i thank You very much for Your email, which i'll take care to
publish as soon.
i will thank You double if You help me to correct the error that
You found.
English is not my mother language and I need the help of my Site
Visitors.
I'd like You to return to my website and play yr game for free,
then i will await for Yr news
Thanks again, all comments are welcome
Fidam
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